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What is your opinion?

Love it

"I loved everything , my best friend will LOOOOVE this book . I enjoy BDSM and this is going great so far."

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Interesting story. Light reader ng , not too graphic

"I didn’t dislike any parts. Chapter is ok. Recommend light reading"

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O wow

"O wow I just got goosebumps from reading this need more to find out what happened next "

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Make the book

"I know it’s an excerpt, but it’s so good. Make the book!! "

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Good

"Good , like the discription "

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Dom

"I enjoy reading this it has a fantastic storyline I sit up reading and can't put it down or wait for next chapter"

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Dom

"Great story so far"

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Yes !!!

"Sexy i like its give a good insight on BDSM so far"

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dom

"bro its been two years WE NEED AN UPDATE!!!"

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Story still developing

"Hi the story is good so far but a little cliche, hoping it picks up soon😁"

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Good

"Very good book. Good how it starts slots. "

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Good read

"I like the story so far"

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Your Are Mine

"It has been good so far, the story & the plot are engaging enough. Good Luck for future works :)"

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I cannot remember the exact title

"I think while the plot is good, it is slightly lacking structure as well as the general world building. Good emotion in the writing, and very few, if any, grammatical errors. I do wish the diction was stronger for a more flowery, descriptive vocabulary to better engage the reader and really put them into the scene "

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Dom

"I’m enjoying it. Only complaint, wish it got real spicy sooner. Guess I’m just a bit impatient. Looking forward to more."

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Hmm

"It's interesting. I don't know how I feel about it. "

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Vill veta mer.......

"Blir nyfiken och Vill läsa mer. Spännande. "

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Good God!

"How did you ever come up with this plot? "

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