What is your opinion?
The demon prince's possession
"Wow...just wow!!! This story was really and truly amazing. It was a fantastic read and I loved it from beginning to end. "
The Demon Prince’s Possession
"Great story to go along with the first one. Glad everything turned out the way it did. "
The demon prince’s possession
"The plot/storyline was perfect but it felt a bit as if you rushed through it in this book compared to when you wrote the first book… i enjoyed it all the same though."
The Demon Prince's Possession
"I really love the premise. There's a lot of lore in this story, which I always love and appreciate b/c it requires so much imagination and I love seeing that. I also enjoyed the characters and romance (I'm a sucker for a morally gray MC, I can't help it lol). I think an area of improvement could be the pacing. The story moves superrrr fast. I would've rather seen more chapters so we could have more backstory set then really dive into it because your plot is so good, it just needed more time to really develop and sink in. Plus, some of the scenes happening one right after the other were jolting (specifically in the last chapter) and I think that's from virtue of the pacing being too quick. Let us have more time to raise the emotional stakes so we as the reader really care about what's happening to the characters and why, esp since you start off superrrr strong with the first section of the first chapter making us wonder what the statue is all about. I love how you circled back to that very well at the end. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing jarring that a simple run through of editing won't catch and fix. Overall, great job, just work on the pacing! "
