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"Fun story plot and want to know more about her previous life."

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"Fun to see a prequel-ish story! Mistaken identity can definitely lead to interesting situations so I was curious to see how this played out. The ending is a cliffhanger however; I was left feeling anxious about the female character. Side note: it's funny to see Billy introduced as Bill. This story is definitely not within the correct timeline, but interesting idea nonetheless."

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