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Omg

"Wow this book had me hooked from start to finish & I can't wait for more 😍 "

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One Mate and a Rejection

"Really enjoyed the story 😊 took awhile for them to have a happy ending 💕nice werewolf story of love,mates and heartbreak ….would recommend for any werewolf fan … thank you author 👏👏👏"

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I love this book

"An amazing story so much hurt and pain and so much emotion a true love story I am happy that emerald and blade ended up together "

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Blade

"Pride and fear is dangerous "

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Very nice

"This was very adventurous and romantic... kept me reading constantly... was really hoping the packs would accept them at the end... lets see what book 2 has to offer"

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One mate and a regection

"I was hoping for more Smutt but it was a great read I just felt like I was back in high school thank you for the adventure though "

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Damn Good

"I am thoroughly enjoying this book. Can't stop reading it"

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One mate and a rejection

"Wow....this was really good. A great read and I enjoyed it."

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A Mate and a Rejection

"Thanks for the story, takes effort, imagination and one's time to write every story I'd be dreadful if I wrote a story so cant judge so thanks again xx"

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One mate and a rejection

"I loved this story, well written, hope there will be a second book 😊"

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One mate and a rejection

"Wow! I read the other reviews and have to say they are a bit harsh. I read the entire book. It does need grammatical editing. The ending kind of left me wanting more. But overall it was a good story."

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Interesting werewolf mate story

"I enjoyed this. My favorite genre. Awaiting the next part of Emerald and Blades story."

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Intriguing

"I am happy they chose their love for each other. That's very bold of them. Please, what is the title of the second part. I would really love to read that too"

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Story is ok

"Ploy was OK, but there were a lot of confusing things. I use screen reading software. The spots where the wrong word was used was very obvious and distracting from the story. The ending felt forced and didn't male much sense. This story has potential but needs work. Keep working on it. :)😀"

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Can’t remember

"I’m enjoying the story so far and I am looking forward to seeing how it gets resolved"

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Hard going

"I won't lie, this was tiring to read, the constant back and forth, the contradicting and the poor grammar made it difficult, I only persevered because I'm stubborn..."

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Bjhb

"while the plot is confusing and keeps contradicting itself - not a bad attempt. Good luck with your writing "

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One mate and a rejection

"I really like the story line, but a lot of things were misspelled and jumbled together. This novel definitely needs a lot of editing."

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Not so great

"The title looked promising so I thought I’ll read. The story started well. But actually the whole story is nonsense. Anyone with brain cells cannot digest this.. "

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Not Readable. Needs Major Work Done

"I’ve only read chapter one but it was so painful to read. Countless grammar mistakes, misspellings, punctuation errors, lack of capitalization, etc. that makes it unreadable for me personally. There is too much dialogue and not enough actual set up for the story so it feels like a drag of banter. The writing style is extremely amateurish and bland. I have only read the first chapter, so this story very well might be interesting plot wise- but I can’t say either way. But what I can say is that major revision and editing is needed for it to be palatable. "

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