Short, Sweet, and Steamy

"Love the glimpse into Bethany Winston's life and what she might have gotten up to after Darrell. I also like the idea of a firefighter being the rebound and the nearest Winston neighbor. Things that didn't work for me: -Jumping from 1st to 3rd person is disorienting. -It wasn't clear that it was around the holidays so the end chapter was a bit jarring. Also, timeline-wise when did Bethany find out about her diagnosis? -Bethany wants to be in control but then she wants to give it up as a sub; those don't seem to align. Darrell very much seems like he'd be bedroom dominant, but with 5 kids either he raped her a lot or she liked bedroom dominance. Either way that's info she would've already known about herself and not discovered with Dan. Overall a nice peek into Bethany's life. Short, sweet, and steamy! Cheers!"