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Unexpected and Powerful

"I really enjoyed this story. When you mentioned the house was haunted (at least according to some people), I honestly expected something cliché. But I kept reading — and when you described the house itself, the atmosphere felt different. No ghosts. No murderer. No cheap twists... just a kid, looking around and at last, does something out of fear... Thank you... keep writing. "

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Interesting storyline!

"-Loved the story, though it was short with only 3 chapters it was still one of the most interesting stories I've read in my time on inkitt. -Amazed by your writing skills! -would love to read more of your work 💙 "

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