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Love the story...Where to buy the complete story po ng book 2? And how to avail? Salamat po.

"The story is very nice.where to buy the complete story of book 2?"

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Laro sa Baga

"Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda Ganda"

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Nice

"The story is so good Its kind of amazing. Masyadong detayado You should write more Because you are so good Keep it up"

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Laro sa baga

"Good good good story"

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Nice!!!!

"A very good plot and very erotic. "

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Thankful

"Thank you otor sa magandang kwento at malaswa din pala..hahahaha..always nalaaubaybay kay Lando."

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Laro sa Baga

"Exciting grabe ang kwento, sna mupdated lagi sobrang galing ng plot nakakagigil ang bawat chapter lalo na kay lando turko at barndo, "

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Laro sa baga

"Maganda kwento"

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McFierce

"Im such a fan po talaga, keep it up, do your thing, be creative, supportahan ta ka hehehe... Bastat wag ka magsasawa at panghinaan ng loob ipagpatuloy tong masterpiece mo... Kung may bayad yung iba gora lang pero will be expecting more from you ha hehehe Basta i will always be rooting out for you :)"

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Great lustful story. salamat

"Aang sarap basahin. sobrang nakakalibog. Worth it Aang pag aabang. good job jarro"

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Next chapter pls.. 🙏

"Anu nangyarre sa security guard at sa.binatang nahuli nya na nakikipag sex sa park... Inabangan ko pa naman. Nawala bigla sa kwento? "

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Erotic.

"absolutely astonishing. Grabe ung mga eksena dito.. hindi pambata.. at kung hindi nila gusto, magskip sila.. i really like how it was written"

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Exciting

"The best tong gay story.. Uulit ulitin ko to basahin bago matulog hahaha alam na😂🤣😅"

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Sobrang ganda

"Sobrang ganda. Kahit ulit ulitin mo ang nobelang ito. Tyak walang umay factor"

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laro sa baga

"i like the plot i like the writing i like characters"

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laro sa baga

"i like the story, so intense, i like the detail and the words used by the author, you will wish that the story never ends "

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Super Hot

"As a gay reader I enjoy the sex scenes. I love the sex acts and the way they were presented. However, I hope that the author will focus more on substance instead of just pure lust. Parang kawawa naman ang mga mabubuting tao nagiging alipin ng kapangyarihan ng mga halimaw. Life is more than that. One thing more, nakaka inlove ang character and personality ni Lando. He is such a great husband and father. Ang sakit sa dibdib makita na binababoy lang sya at niyuyurakan na parang puta. I hope that there will be justice and that Turko and the Don will be punished through a fitting revenge from Lando and Elena. It hurts too that the children are being corrupted. So sad."

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Too Many Things Happening All at Once

"The attempt was there, one could easily tell, but there were too many things happening all at the same time for a very short story. Too many characters and events that it felt like everything was all over the place. In some chapters, the author wrote about his behind-the-scenes thoughts, e.g., he was busy, etc., and so he was cutting this short. And so it’s obvious that the author himself was overwhelmed by the things he wanted to happen that he wasn’t able to sustain the entire piece. "

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