Inkitt
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Awesome story

"The fact that she is human but does have the ability to heal"

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Loved it

"If the author decided to revise this I would love to read it again. I'm hooked and can't wait to read whatever else she has written."

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Finally together

"I love this story. It talks of live list than found in a deeper more complete version. "

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Intriguing

"It’s great so far. A different perspective than I’ve been reading with other books which is great"

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Mine

"NooooπŸ₯Ήthis can’t happen "

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Mine

"This is crazy , communication is needed by Roy , now Kimberly . Wonder when Kimberlyβ€˜s dad is going to arrive at the scene… too many questions and not enough answers and now another cliff hanger … argh "

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Love this want to read more!

"I like this book. I would like her and Roy to end up together. I wonder what her super powers are? So cool cannot wait to read more."

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Mine

"Good so far"

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Mine

"I am loving this book so far, iam not liking having to wait for the next chapters as I’m far too impatient,I’m a fast reader when I like a story ,) I need to know what’s going to happen to them I’m hooked πŸ’•"

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so far so good

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Good story

"I like the story and the way it plays out so far. Would recommend it to others. Keep up the good work! "

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Loving it

"Loving still want more cant wait good work"

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Mine

"Good book at first it was a slow read then just as it got good it was done hope there is more"

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Mine

".. still reading to get to the interesting stuff "

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Sad, and bittersweet

"I have mixed feelings about this story, although I love Roy's character, I found Kimberly's character to be quite annoying. She was all over the place emotionally. The only plus of the story was Roy getting a mate, even though the whole story was screwed up with the mates. It made the moon goddess seem like a real bitch who sucks at producing mates. Other then all the weird drama the story was decent."

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Waiting

"Currently, this read is typical of the werewolf stories I've read. But I'm optimistic that the plot will take me in a different direction "

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Slow start

"I like the path the novel is heading in.. I didn’t so much like the slow start at the beginning but I guess it was needed to explain the characters backgrounds. I also am not a fan of the detailed explanation of minor details. The last few chapters have been great, the anticipation..the author is leaving me wanting more. "

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So far so good

"Great so far! Too early in the story for any further reaction."

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