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She never sleeps

"I enjoyed it very much "

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Great story but a little confusing.

"What happened to the original ghost story? Four friends were killed (1 being his little sister), and then it does a time jump? Alternate reality? Timeline jump? It mentions villages, but the dad was driving a suv. It's a great story. Please don't take offense. I'm just confused. I got really into the book, and I would love to read more. It's just that the transitions are muddy. Also, did he marry his sister? "

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"Very confusing 😕 "

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