What is your opinion?
The old one
"Great story"
Amazing !
"I loved the characters ,their bonds are unique , the prose is not the selling point but it's definitely UP there . Also the mythology , the demons and story are all really cool , even though i'm on chapter 4 i'll continue with great pleasure ."
Exceptional plot!
"Rarely do I award a perfect 5, but this plot is exceptionally well-crafted. Everything, including the characters Oz and Maut, is executed with precision. The pacing is commendable, and the incorporation of images is a thoughtful touch, reducing the need for excessive imagination. The author's writing style is impressive, and in the few chapters I've read, none have been dull. Keep up the excellent work, and I hope you continue to avoid too many filler chapters."
Lots of Interesting Characters!
"Yes, you read it right. This story has interesting characrers inside it and they are so unexpectedly funny at times even 😆 my favorite is Sami! I rate her 5/5, this small demons can blurt some random funny stuff and brings a smile to my face! The story itself is unique and fast-paced. I love fast-pace story cause it wont be boring to read and there is always things to look for! However, for a fantasy, I would like to have a slower pace at the beginning at least so I can follow the story very well :) For example there is no mentioning about the Dark Gods in the first chapter and suddenly they are facing the end of the universe. I wanna know more about the background, or about the world-building that Oz has :) Also about Nesu!^^ I thought Nesu is some kind of Oz's name 🤣, but turns out it is a name for Master 😌 I think providing richer background will make this story even greater!^^ The plot is interesting and I am sensing future chapters will be just as great as this one! I will get back to it sometimes later I think, cause it is just great! Good job so far, girl ♡"
The old one (good read)
"The grammar of this story is amazing, it might be there and there were you get lost when reading but I like that on the next chapter you get to get those answers. I’ve never read anything relating to the story so it was amazing to discover new characters as I read."
Intriguing reading
"These chapters captivated me from the beginning with their fiery plot and engaging characters. Each page is peppered with intrigue and twists that keep the reader hungry for more. The author's spicy writing adds a unique touch, transforming the reading experience into an exciting and delightful journey. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a stimulating and plot-filled read like these chapters."
The Old One
""The Old One" Immerses readers in a haunting and captivating tale that explores the twisted realms of dark gods with an unparalleled mastery of storytelling. Author Yara Miglietti crafts a narrative that seamlessly weaves together cosmic horror, divine machinations, and mortal struggles, creating a literary tapestry that lingers in the reader's psyche. I am definitely curious for the next chapter Keep the good worke next chapter"
Keep up the good work
"The Old One I recently had the pleasure of immersing myself in the gripping world of Oz, a literary fun and interesting book that explores the enigmatic and unsettling domain of dark gods. Authored by Yara Miglietti, this book is a spellbinding journey into the depths of mythology, blending the macabre and the mystical in a way that captivates the imagination. "
A really great start to your book!
"Spoiler Alert in this review! I quite enjoyed this story so far and look forward to the following chapters. It has a great concept and I really do enjoy reading stories with compelling demon characters in it! To make it even better: Some of the dialogue in chapter one was confusing to follow, perhaps going over this again and clarifying what is being said would do well for your readers. Maybe add a bit more description into how your characters are interacting with one another. What are they feeling? How are they speaking? I saw in your comments section that you said Nesu is a word used for Master. Maybe try writing this in so that it clears up the dialogue in chapter one. Describing the blood lust that Sami gets and how Oz has to steer Sami away would be a compelling addition to your story. It would be a nice way to show the audience how the two characters interact with each other and draw your readers in. There was a lot of switching between tenses while reading the story. Something to note when editing your writing. I really liked the description of Maut. I thought this was a brilliant little paragraph especially when you ended it with Oz’s thought of her. I didn’t expect Oz and Maut to be previous lovers and I can’t wait to see what happens next! A really great start to your book! "
