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Veryyyyy lovely story I’ve ever read here

"Wow this is the first time I read a book so short but so captivating. It does not require too many characters to move the book forward unlike many other books and yet still captivating every paragraph. I never get bored reading the words and the lines. The grammar is far from perfect. Many errors but it never even hinder my interest to keep reading. Imagine if you have an editor to polish that grammar, my gosh I believe your book will be amazingly perfect."

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Awesome!

"Looking good so far"

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The beast mate

"I love this story ❤️. I am really looking forward to reading the second book 📖 😊 "

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The Beast Mate

"Love this story and cannot wait to read the next. "

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Amazing

"😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍"

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The beasts mate

"Love it so far ❤️. Think you need to continue with the story need to know what happens."

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no idea i cant remember

"good use of words abit unrealistic that she fell for him so quickly but then again we use books to escape the real world so quite a good tead"

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Very interesting plot

"Very interesting plot. The major characters are well rounded. It a bit slow but it's readable. Can't wait for the rest. "

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Pretty good!!!!!

"I love it!!!! Just need more polishing on the writing and the time between scenes so it can flow better."

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Audrey

"Not sure about the plot or character development "

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Good Story

"This is a good story with a lot of potential story plots. There is a definite room for improvement the over use of very should be changed by either removing the very or using a stronger word that doesn’t need the very. 🩷 keep up the great work and looking forward to the next book."

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Nice

"Liked the story want to read more"

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The beast mate

"Could use some editing here and there"

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