Quick Note
Ok first, thanks for opening my story!
This is my first BTS fanfic and first try at the ABO world. Yet I’m going to put my own spin on this. First the guys hairstyles are not in any specific order or era. Just whatever I feel like. In all these stories, betas are hardly mentioned and it makes it sound like only omegas can conceive while alphas are always tough and hard. I love it when the alphas show a soft side.
The alphas will have ruts and omegas heats but it will depend on the gender for betas and alpha females.
I do love the idea of courting but also of having a true mate. So for me, they will be able to sense their mate and then begin the courting process. I’m just a romantic that way.
Now I’m not sure if you can completely consider this ABO but there are some aspects. Figured I’d tell you all upfront so I don’t get too many comments saying, “this isn’t right” or “do you even know what you’re doing?” I’m doing my own thing thank you. Maybe I’ll do a more original one someday, you never know.
Now if that hasn’t scared you off, or maybe intrigued you, please enjoy!
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I like that you clearly state this is your own take on ABO. The focus on softer alphas, romance, and courting sets the tone well and helps manage reader expectations. You might tighten the explanation a bit so it sounds more confident and less defensive, but overall, it’s clear what kind of story you want to tell, and that clarity works in your favor.
Hey! Your worldbuilding is honestly incredible. Every part of the story feels meaningful and full of emotion, and the depth of the lore makes it so easy to get completely immersed in your world. The latest chapter was especially impressive, and while reading it, I found myself thinking of a few ideas and theories about where the story could go next. I’d love to share them with you if you’d be interested.