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What is your opinion?
Wonderful writing.
"The beauty in the way this author describes her surroundings is amazing. The way she talked about the complexities of relationships made them feel like a real situation. Like the character was real herself. I think the more this story comes together it will keep getting better and better. I look forward to seeing what lies ahead."
Engaging plot and characters
"I find this plot very interesting, being a fan of fantasy series, movies, and books. The first-person narrative, focusing on Aria and the other characters, is detailed by the author. The pacing suits my preference, and the writing style is easy to understand, not complex. One suggestion I have is perhaps placing important details in chapter notes for a more engaging experience."
