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Jackie

"Such a great book and a fab ending "

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Harlow

"I feel bad for Harlow. Poor girl had to go through so much shit because of her screwed up family, especially her mom. Her dad should have had the balls to get rid of her mom for good without having to send Harlow away. Her brothers should have never not have gone to visit her. they should have kept in contact with her personally. I get they trusted their dad but still, if u love someone you make a person effort no matter what. I'm sorry she went through the miscarriage(s) and Dean too, but I'm glad she had Toby his parents, and her 2 brothers by her side. I can't believe the shit that Hendrix was spewing. I'm glad he would up with schizophrenia and was just a regular old fricking psycho, at least there's meds for his condition. And I'm glad she didn't kill him, I don't think she would have been able to come back from that. All in all, this was a really good story. "

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Harlow

"Enjoying the story. Has me in tears"

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Great read

"Loved it! So good!"

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Has Grammer mistakes, but who cares!

"Yes there is Grammer mistakes but no one is perfect!! This story is Awesome I could NOT put it down!!! Want to read more from this author!!"

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Harlow

"Great book, lots of twist and turns. Kept me reading and could not put the book down."

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Many repetitive errors

"The main errors I remember being repeated in this and other stories are to instead of too, there instead of their, and of instead of have. There were several typos and other grammatical errors too but I'm sad to only have one story left to read."

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Good book

"It was a good book. The author did state that it hadn’t been edited yet so I can’t complain about a few wrong words... I loved the plot and felt deeply for the characters. I enjoyed this book!"

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Harlow

"This was one of the best stories I have ever read. "

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Review

"Overall great story, couldn’t put it down! "

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I really enjoyed it .

"Really enjoyed it "

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Really good book

"I really like the book and it’s a good emotional book I love reading it "

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Amazing

"Loved it.. can we have a sequel of harlow and toby?"

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Harlow

"I love this story, and you can feel pain Harlow has gone through and still going through of being let down by thevpeople who are suppose to cherish her the most"

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Excellent

"Thank You for a wonderful story. I cried through most of it. I had to take a allergy pill to stop the running nose *cough cough* Only thing I would had liked a quick wrap up. But all in all i was a great read "

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Good MC novel

"Great novel. I love the premise and the writing style. I do not like all the yelling though"

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Great read!

"Anxiously waiting to see who Harlow ends up with and whether she keepsake of her brothers besides Kody and Leo."

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Loved this story

"Being an Aussie I loved that she had vegimite on toast. Some weetbixs would have also made her feel better. It was nice reading words that reflected how we speak. I have read so many stories and thought “ that’s not the words I would use”. It has a nice twist. Did not see that coming. "

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Good quick read.

"I really enjoyed it overall. There were some grammar issues however, it didn't effect the story. I do wish there was more. Maybe another couple of epilogues about Harlow and Toby's life. If they stay together, kids, marriage etc. Im glad she was able to mend her relationship with a few of her brothers and her dad to a degree. Looks like he stepped up in the end."

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Emotional and original

"The way the author cobvered trauma in this story really hit hard, and had me in tears at times. Covering issues like abandonment, childhood trauma, ptsd, miscarriage, kidnapping, and abuse. But it also healed with the help of of toby and leo, sue is fantastic and wish we had more scenes from her, preferably hitting hendrix on the head with the magazine in front of the mc after they moved. There was also many plot twists that are definitely typical, you think youve pegged some of the characters and then bamn nope you never knew them. "

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