Inkitt
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Good story

"Interesting plot. It seems this may be a translation to English from another language as the grammar is a bit off some places are hard to follow because of this but I M enjoying the story"

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Owned by the alpha brothers

"Good read nice development of characters and the story is flowing nicely "

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love this book

"i absolutely love this story i cant wait for more chapters to see where it goes but i want her with the 2 brothers and the one vampire at her school that was nice to her! "

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Enjoyed

"It's exciting and intriguing "

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Owned my alpha brothers

"Thank you for continuing this novel here, I am so excited for the updates "

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Alpha brothers

"This is leading to a great confrontation. I am enjoying the characters!"

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Bad boys???

"I really enjoy this story. I think the brothers are her mates but rahans attitude isn't like one. Does she really want to be alpha seriously I don't find her strong enough"

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Addicting story

"The story is great. So much tension, drama, lust that keeps you sucked in. The only complaint I have is how long it takes for the next chapter 😆"

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Owned by Alpha Brothers

"I like the characters and the stoeyline."

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Omg omg

"Raihan definitely!! The tension will make it delicious!! "

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I need the rest

"Where is the rest of the book ? I'm dying right now I'm addicted now I also think you're so good you could make this a hard back book I most definitely want it "

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Everyone

"As it's very good"

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JUST UTTERLY AMAZING

"This book is just utterly amazing. I was hooked in right from the first chapter, and despite feeling sleepy, I kept on reading till I slept off. I would recommend this book to anyone to be honest. It’s just very good and I don’t think anyone could possibly dislike it. Personally, I love it so friggin much. I’ll be waiting for more chapter cuz I like to see it till the end!"

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Errr as you put it

"A lot of grammatical errors and the story feels constantly repetitive which makes it cringey to read in the worst way but I see where you’re going with this and I am intrigued "

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Owned by the Alfa brothers

"Fbcgrcvrbvd"

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Good

"It is good"

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Wierd way they talk and treat each other

"I am not sure about things in this book yet. Compelling but still unsure, have to continue reading "

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Alpha

"Not bad, but to many hero."

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Owned by the alpha brothers

"Hi the writing style, and the flow is a bit confusing sometimes alot of things happening so quickly also I have never heard of high school and college in one building also all this bulling and everyone Hating her and getting almost raped so quickly It almost feels like the author is trying to force us to like or sympathize with the main character. It needs a bit more work I read a lot of books not a writer. That's my opinion "

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