What is your opinion?
want more!
"It made me laugh. I appreciated both characters inner thoughts. I was intrigued by Kat when she was on the plane and described her view of home as, "there was no place like home". The Oz connection was a nice set up. I laughed at the old lady, and got a good mental image. I appreciated that you brought her back, for a short time, at the airport again. I am interested to see how these two characters connect. Will they be together, or will his criminal element be a stopper for Kat? Constructive criticism - at this point I have none. I enjoyed the first two chapters and enjoyed meeting each character. I am curious about Kat's mother and how it all ties in. My suggestion (not that you won't do this) is to keep the comical secondary characters (the old lady on the plane) - the laugh out loud ones. Will we meet a few more in the upcoming chapters? "
I want more
"I feel like I am with these characters- I can see them and already have a sense of who they are but I'm hoping to be surprised too. I like the flowing sentence structure. Some thoughts are short and kept that ways, others are longer- it all flows . The character development is top notch. I'm enjoying the conflict and the humor. That only works with well developed characters so kudos on being able to do that. I am intrigued and curious- where is this going? Wanting to find out more indicates the plot is well constructed. I am guessing it would be my mistake to assume too much here and that's fun- good bad guy meets bad good girl? I'm looking forward to meeting more of the cast and understanding the conflict. Why is the mother unhappy to see her? I'm all for entertaining /witty reading and this is just that. "
Cool Characters!
"Aaaa this story! I just decide to randomly try resding this book and Oh, Man, Thank God I did that! The narrative is funny, and I love thr voice both the male and female character! I find the beginning is pretty well executed! Looking forward to the next chapter!^^"
Curious Kitty
"Interesting read and I enjoyed how we see each chapters from a different protagonist's voice. Looking forward to reading more and learning about Kitten's backstory! Meow! "
Captivating!
"Eager to read the next chapter :)"
Would love more!
"I love these two chapters, and wish I had more! The characters are likeable, interesting and they have clear back stories that I would love to learn more about. The story is intriguing and catches the reader quickly - multiple stories within the story have the reader interested in the characters lives and the bike club as a whole. The writing is fantastic - I can visualize where the story is taking place and what the characters look and act like giving me a great sense of who they are and how they interact with each other and the world around them. I wish I could keep reading!"
I need to know more!
"I loved that this is a mix of romance and suspense! I would recommend this book to anybody that is looking for a nice read during the spring/summer time! I think the novel is very interesting and gives you that feeling that you want to know more as soon as you finish a chapter! I loved the author’s writing, the scenarios are described very well and it makes it easy to imagine what the characters are doing and where they are at any moment. I would definitely love to finish this novel and find out what is the mystery between Jethro, Kat and her family! "
More please !
"I was hooked from the start! The chapters were funny, compelling and well written. All the details made me feel like I was standing right alongside the characters. Left me wanting more !! "
Want more chapters!
"What did I dislike? Nothing really! Maybe feeling I’m being dropped into it? but thats any book! A green flag for a good book even! I have so many questions, pharmacists daughter? What’s the back story? a motorcycle club? where will this lead?! Really enjoyed this, it made me curious and it made me laugh! and I know I will be thinking about these characters in the coming days. Hope we can get more chapters about them!"
Looks fun!
"The storyline appears engaging, showcasing potential conflicts stemming from diverse perspectives among the characters. The initial two chapters offer insights into each character's personality. While certain elements may be perplexing, they can be overlooked, and the transitions between points of view are skillfully executed."
