What is your opinion?
Funny and felt included
"This story is so much fun it is like you are part of the workplace and all these zany things happen between the employees and friends. Then the group meets up and plays a RPG roleplaying game and those interactions are funny and wonderful and just makes you feel your playing along side them."
Love
"I loved everything about this book so far. The comedy is great it made me laugh so much. I look forward to continuing the story. "
Great story!
"I really like the story so far and the introduction of the characters. There are a few grammar issues that could be handled, but that could be done when the story is being edited. It's a bit difficult to rate the plot when I don't really know where it is going, but I will be around to find out. The writing style is good, vivid, and sometimes a bit more tell than show. It's not a problem as long as it doesn't happen too often. I like that there is a picture of the different species and the characters at the beginning of the story. But I also think that it won't be appreciated by everybody since there is no imagination to create the characters in our minds. But you do you and the story will be a BANGER! Great job so far! "
GAVIN IS SO AWKWARD, I LOVE IT!!
"I love the character "Megan" so much, the way she hides her emotions is very relatable, but Cory has learnt that no matter how she speaks, her emotions are always in her eyes. That awkward moment when they first met was hilarious, Gavin is so funny, he almost makes me cry. I really hope she wouldn't be that hurt when she finds out he was the one who hurt her years ago. I can not wait to read what happens next! "
THAT AWKWARD MOMENT
"That awkward moment in this story are A LOT!! This brings smile and laugh to my face! I actually feel so entertained by the beginning of this story! I think it is a splendid one :) The author knows how to blend romantic comedy in a very unique way! Our hero, Gavin, is just a beautiful walking disaster who is also an awkward human being lol. Megan, though, seems more cold and cool. Imagine when this two mixed together! I am SO excited for their futher encounters! I hope no more ripping pants in the next chapter! At least not in the public (if it is private... well 😌😌 you know what I mean 😉🤭) Good one!!♡"
OMG
"This was so funny! I can't wait to read more of the story. "
An interesting start
"The DnD gaming element is fun. Maybe the introduction of the characters is a little early in the book (giving some things away?), and yet it works. The awkwardness of Gavin's character is amusing if a bit over the top. But from there, it seems rushed into an encounter with Megan. Maybe this needs more development? Also, the purposeful messing up of Gavin the very next day seems to need more explanation (but perhaps this is coming?). The author needs to clean up the grammar and choose a voice (third person or first) for consistency and readability. The plot, however, is intriguing and I look forward to seeing where it goes."
Great book so far
"Great story so far! It has great potential. Just needs a little more backstory, and the plot seems a bit rushed. I do love the concept, and can’t wait to see how it all unfolds"
Promising
"Upon initial evaluation, it appears that the overall content holds potential, despite the narrative feeling a bit hasty. Nonetheless, I have a strong intuition that the forthcoming material will be significantly more captivating and intriguing."
Promising start
"The initial chapter was quite lengthy, but the beginning was captivating. Excited to discover what unfolds in the rest of the story!"
