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Feminine Devotion

"Hot, hot HOT 🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️"

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The ceo

"I wished it was longer and had more tell us more about sex with dick but overall it was good "

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It’s good

"It needs more back story, and more scenes of just them together and not at the office overlap I like it a lot "

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Great

"Great story "

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Spicy!!!!

"Amazing! I love this writer and all the short books/stories!!! OMG, I need all the stories!!! Amazing writing with about a handful of grammatical errors, but it's completely overlooked to read the steamy and heartwarming scenes!!! Love it!!"

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Feminine devotion

"This story is done in a very descriptive writing style. Most of the dialog is done through thought, making it an interesting read. The male lead is complicated. He's a dominant man, but wanting to please his female partner, takes on submission in a dominant way. The female lead is a submissive personality but learns her dominance through her sexuality. This tale screams sizzle to any reader. 😉 "

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Feminine Devotion

"The writing was so lousy that I didn't even try to finish this story."

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