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Las pláticas de el corazón y la mente.

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Summary

Porque el corazón y la mente siempre están en un debate?? O porque siempre la mente es brusca y el corazón tan invulnerable...bueno podrás leer lo que esas pláticas tratan y talvez solamente deducir el porqué son así estos 2, que siempre provocan una guerra interna.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Como todo empezó...

🫀: ¡Hola mente!, que tal va todo 🧠: Hola, normal se encuentra todo la clase esta aburrida.

🫀: Uff ni que lo digas, oyee hoy dijo papi que vendria a vernos yupii toy feliz! 🧠: Eso ha dicho las veces pasadas y siempre nos quedamos esperando.

🫀: Pero talvez esta vez sea diferente...talvez esta vez si cumpla y nos venga a ver, sabes me a puesto mal que unos niños nos molestan porque les dijimos que no tenemos papá y nos dicen que somos....diferentes, eso es cierto?, somos diferentes porque no tenemos papá 🧠: Claro que no, no somos diferentes solo nuestro papá no esta todo el tiempo con nosotros y sus papás si lo estan con ellos.

🫀: pero porque nosotros no tenemos a nuestro papá todo el tiempo? Como ellos lo tienen, acaso no lo merecemos??. 🧠: Noo claro que no, claro que nos lo merecemos, pero nuestro papá esta un poquito mas ocupado que el de ellos y por eso no nos viene a ver seguido

🫀: Seguro? 🧠: porsupuesto.

🫀: Bueno entonces me preparare porque hoy dijo que nos vendria a ver y lo abrazare muy pero muy fuerte 🧠: Claro que sí, pero si no viene no te vayas a poner mal, entendido?

🫀: Si si como digas adios ire a alistarme

🧠: Adiós, espero que no te desilusiones otra vez.


El corazón al principio es ingenuo, no sabe cuando sera lastimado....



Espero que les haiga gustado, subire el otro capitulo en unos dias...no importa si no dejan corazón, con que lo lean estara bien.🫀🧠

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