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The Devil's Curtain Call

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Summary

What would happen if you were ripped from your father and made to sacrifice yourself for all you had made together? What would happen if you agreed?

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Millenia ago:

They had both knelt together at the spot, the ground around them barren, the bald hill sloping away from them like the curve of a skull.

“Do it,” said his father.

The son looked up into his eyes, and for the briefest of moments, saw in them pain like a bottomless grave.

For a moment, neither spoke.

Then his father nodded, and they breathed down onto the earth in unison.

A sapling sprang up and muted green leaves appeared.

“It will be here,” his father said then and gripped his son’s arm. “It will be the final battle.”

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