What is your opinion?
Marvelous-
"Some people have a side of them that nobody will ever see. A dark side of your mind that can't be described. The writing in this story is amazing, and truly shows a whole new perspective. I myself write stories like this cause there is just something captivating about the feeling, a strange adrenaline. I like to see that I'm not the only one cause sometimes I think I'm a little bit mental, lol. The writing is really good, capturing the emotion perfectly- I still strive to write this well! The fact that this is so underrated is just sad, because this author is incredibly talented! I couldn't stop reading as the story was always interesting (don't tell anyone I stayed up past 4am reading) It seems though the author may have given up, but I just wanna say I applaud your talent and time spent writing this, I'd gladly read anything else you write! If you are still around I'd honestly love some help with my book! "
Dark, ugly, and incredible
"I'm not sure what this says about me as a person, but I absolutely loved this story in all its rawness and ugliness. The idea of following such a sick, twisted mind through his struggles in mundane everyday life is so unique and intriguing. You sunk your hooks into me in the first chapter and didn't let go since them. Plot-wise, I'm very curious where this is going...if it will be a story of a madman finding his way back to power or if it will be a story of redemption. I think I would follow it to the end either way. I loved seeing Damon's disconnected interaction with his family and his girlfriend, and I'm very curious as to what Eric is planning and what his true motives are. The characters in this are probably my favorite element. They are deeply developed and three-dimensional. I love seeing things through Damon's eyes and following his depraved struggles. His reactions to different situations are so unexpected, and yet his love for his brother gives him a more tender, sensitive side. Eric and Rick are also very interesting characters with quirks that set them apart. I'm interested in seeing how they fit into the story. The writing style itself is amazing. I love Damon's voice and the way that you vividly depict his emotional struggles. I hope that one day I will be able to write like this. There were a few typos in there, but not enough to distract from the story. The only part that I would criticize was in the second chapter. The first chapter hooked me, but the beginning of the second chapter lulled a little too much. Don't get me wrong, I really like the way that you take the time to explore Damon's psyche, but I think that you should try to bring on the action with his girlfriend a little quicker so that you don't lose the reader. Fight to keep them in your grasp. It was lulling for the first half of the chapter, but seeing his reaction to the drunk man drew me in SO quickly. It was really a brilliant scene. All in all, this is really incredible. I can't wait to see where the story goes! Great work!"
