Inkitt
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Great so far!

"Interesting plot so far. The author hasn’t rushed the character build and unlike a lot of books, I’m genuinely ensure how the story will unfold. "

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The Mafias Mercy

"Great story so far "

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Need more

"Love this book I want more…when will It be available on the Dreame app so I can get To finish it "

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The Mafia’s mercy

"You are a very good writer and I can understand that you need to earn a living too. Good luck! Love the story❤️❤️"

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Good plot

"Story is good so far. I hope she can make her mind up. Possibly try and get her brother out "

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The mafia's mercy

"Such a great story so far. Can not wait to see what happens next. I hope Mercy gives him push back and he has to win her over. Make his soft side come out. He shot her though.... Great job! I am invested. "

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I like it

"Hey Love ur book"

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Good

"Interesting story 😊"

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