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What is your opinion?
Mob / Werewolf
"Love the build of the story, can't wait to read on. Grammer I don't pay much attention, cause nobody is perfect."
Alpha trapped mate
"The story is getting much better I just hope she is able to get away from the guy that her father give her too and go to the her boss"
A little underdeveloped
"The plot has potential to be a great story but the characters seem a little underdeveloped as well as rush for the two main characters as mates. It was actually awkward for me to read the scene about the massage because there was so little about them working together, getting to know each other, drawing out the lust before he touched her. The dialogue also seems a little juvenile. The plot is really enjoyable but just needed to be explored a little bit deeper. "
