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Love it

"I love how you expressed it in a subtle way"

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RAW. REAL. RELATBLE

"Very short poem, but it manges to say alot with few words, just to break your heart❤️💔"

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5 stars.

"Wow, very powerful piece of writing, thank you for sharing your fears, and I hope you never have to face them. "

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POETRY

"I love the vulnerability expressed in the poem. The all too familiar art of covering up the truth with something more palatable and believable. It reminds me of the human condition. The inexplicable feeling of not belonging. All in all assuming this poem is something to go by (and I believe it is) then i have no doubt that you're a rockstar. Anyone this in touch with their inner self is worth knowing. Please write more. "

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PoetrY

"True, and so relatable. For a 13 year old you are a good writer. I love this poem. "

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