I hope you crate a sequel

"Thank you for writing this tail. I can see your great imagination was put to the test. I hope you write a sequel to finish the story of how he gets the honey. And maybe other adventures where he helps to rescue those on the high seas. In the beginning your story is extremely redundant. I know you were trying to let us know the feel of your story. It just was really difficult to get through. In the middle you stop telling us who is talking and that becomes slightly confusing. Thank you for sharing your talents in writing with us readers. I look forward to reading more of your work."