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What is your opinion?
Great
"Has a good flow throughout the story, there are some grammar errors here and there though. "
Awesome
"This is one of the best stories I've read. I love the way you talk about her illnesses. Those parents should be treated the way they treated Alice. "
Great start
"I'm liking this story so far. The trial they have in the relationship then sorting them out is similar to real life. It would be great to see her start getting more confidence in herself and then by extension others. "
Horrible waste of time
"Absolutely terrible plot and Alice has so much wrong with her and never gets better. This was a complete waste of my time. "
