Inkitt
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In between kisses I whisper

"Love this story so far. Can’t read the whole story yet. Will post more at the end. But so far it’s good."

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Samira

"Getting interesting they will fall in love.next update"

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"Some small grammatical errors but the story is good. Wouldn't have put it under the Erotica category though"

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