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"The book was good. I would've liked if it had gone into more details about certain things. And this could've just been me but I thought she was human this whole time up until the second last chapter when I realised it was him. Not that I have a problem with it, it was that there wasn't proper clarification. But all in all it was good. "

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Alien

"I love scfi and the dif species that the writer create. The way they can somehow communicate. A fantasy world"

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Great book

"Really enjoyed this story pity they couldn't have a relationship "

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Interesting premise

"The character development is very good and keeps my interest. Very easy to be caught up in the story and want to know what’s going to happen next."

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Loved it!

"I was hooked from the beginning. Characters were great. I’d love to read more of your short stories :)"

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Great work

"Keep writing very good work"

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Alien

"A nice story.. I liked reading it, and it was told at a good pace. Not to slow, not to fast. But I think that there was more that you could tell. Like maybe what was jareth thinking when he found her. She was all about how sexy he was and how good looking, but personally i think that that is not the first thing you think when you are in pain and on a strange planet... And maybe tell us more about how she looks, except for blue with black dots... "

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The Alien

"Cute story about the interactions between two beings from different solar systems when one of them crash lands on an unknown planet.. If help and acceptance of others was practiced, we just might be ready for another humanoid species to visit us."

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Brenda

"well there is some work that needs attention."

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