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Precursor

"Intriguing story! Full of twists and secrets! The only problem I had was keeping up with all the various characters. But it was a fun ride! I was glad when Melissa found her 2 brothers and best friend after all those years, relatively unscathed."

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"Great storyline "

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So far so good

"I'm loving this novel so far and can't wait to find out more!"

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Well crafted and fascinating

"The story has a great opening, that drew me in. I loved the idea of a secret underground subway system. It's really well-written and shows the author's consideration and dedication. Some characterizations are reall great, in male characters' dialogues and internal monologues. Female characters, especially teens, are okay though not the best, I think I can't blame the author for this. Overall, I'm really glad I stumbled upon this book."

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The Precursor

"Detective Thriller meets Sci Fi. A gripping story of a futuristic FBI investigator in pursuit of who or what made 3 friends vanish 9 years before. The finger points at a secretive engineering firm and its surprisingly long lived owner. Well constructed plot, nicely sketched characters and flowing dialogue set up the twists and surprises."

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