Interesting Idea

"I really enjoyed the way the man was dreaming and playing around in his head, and his obligations were quite interesting too- I mean, the groom was his drinking buddy and the wife his secret affair! What are the odds of that? Nice! I especially loved the ending as it was funny in a way. The way he argues with himself about why he should be at the wedding is also well done. The only thing I'd improve was that at some points it was slightly confusing. A few times, the sentences just made me wonder whether he was dreaming or not- though this is only a slight problem. Also, you made a slight mistake in the first line, but apart from that, nicely written! Your style is pretty unique!"