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This book is Amazing!

"I need more! I read the whole thing in a day! I couldn’t help it. It’s the exact kind of fantasy I constantly crave thank you for creating such a great story!"

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Fabulous

"This story has everything in it. The writing is great. Can't stop reading."

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Wonderful and compelling start.

"5 stars on the writing style and more. There are only 3 chapters posted, but I saw the scenes in my mind easily. It makes a reader eager for more. I’m looking forward to the rest of the story. There are some words up tight with other words when there should be a space between them. But that is an Inkitt problem not the author’s, because it happens when a word is italicized, and the author doesn’t always catch it. "

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