What is your opinion?
Stepfather taboo
"A ver cómo acdba"
Great book
"Hot and intriguing "
Step fathers taboo
"J'ai beaucoup aimé ce livre. "
So good!
"This book is great. Love it so much !!"
Fantastic story
"I love this! It was interesting and I couldn’t stop reading!"
Stepfather Taboos
"Loved this!!! Can’t wait for book 2!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"
Pree
"Hot hot hot Can't wait to read b00k 2"
Great book
"Great book, I really enjoyed it. The mom is a total Bee! Griffin is a good dude. She did him so wrong"
stepfather taboos
" great book "
Stepfather Taboos
"When will chapters from the 2nd book be available to read?"
Stepfather taboo
"I really like this book. Pls update the book 2 asap"
Stepfather taboos
"I was so happy when griffin got bea back and appalled that her mother could arrange something as dark as that to her own daughter, and I hope the rest of the story comes soon I really want to see how things progress for griffin and bea"
Stepfathers Taboo
"Wild ! Interesting read"
Stepfather Taboos
"I really like this story when it finally got to the part of the two kissing! It was a little boring at first but got so much better!"
Stop repeating yourself
"The story and idea is great, but the author often repeats the same thought over again in different paragraphs, changing a few things, words or the way it's said, but it's basically a repeat. If that was taken out the story would flow much better and would be better over all"
Stepfathers taboo
"When is book 2 out very frustrating having to wait "
My step father
"There is a lot of repetition of scenes"
Poignant
"Love the story line, love the way you are handling the intricacies of such complex emotions with great attention to detail. It has such a romantic and poignant feel, that I can actually share empathy with the protagonists. However I hope what I say next can be taken as constructive criticism and not negative.. I find you tend to describe the same things at least twice over by just using different expressions especially while giving the setting or environmental descriptions... I find myself skipping paragraphs while reading. My apologies if I misinterpreted or caused you negative feelings in anyway. But I really love the story so far"
Djtlovebooks
"Where is book 2?"
Stepfather and stepdaughter falling in love
"This is a story with great potential. The characters are pretty clear in the beginning but all of a sudden the mother's character changes drastically. A number of events are told in an elaborate way, sometimes repeating sentences or phrases a few paragraphs apart. The real father then selling his daughter is an opportunity to explore further (in my opinion) and yet that doesn't happen. It could have created great suspense but now it seemed a bit trivial. I've read a number of comments and the author genuinely seems to care about the readers' feedback, wanting to integrate it in the next chapters. That in itself shows me the author will grow in future stories. My advice would be: be aware of too many repetitions when describing the psychological world of the main characters and use the opportunities like human trafficking, drug OD, etc to keep up the suspense. Suspense regularly going up throughout a story will keep your readers hooked."
