What is your opinion?
Intrigued
"It's an interesting story that gets you hooked. I would like to see how the story progresses down the line. What the Max has to offer and how he progresses as a character."
Mysterious
"The way the author wrote this story was somewhat confusing to me at first, but after reading a little more, I could understand clearer what the author had been trying to say. The picture the author paints for us is clear, and I like the scenarios the author wrote about, as I feel it helped keep the excitement in the story. There are parts that spark your imagination, and as I read, I felt like I'd been watching a movie almost, the way I was so clearly able to see the scene the author describes to us. I'm thrilled to have come across this story- well done!"
This is my kind of story
"This was so amazing! I love how it has a little plot from the detail given, to make it seem like a big plot!"
It is great!
"As every first draft, the wording, grammar and the book writing style is still undefined. But again, it's seems as good as it should be for a first draft. I will keep following the story. "
Good book
"I find the plot compelling. The story is quite interesting and captivating the problem is the message is not well passed on sometimes. Though I admire your efforts to make English novels the grammar here must be checked out and fixed. Big words in poorly written sentences are useless they don't make me understand more or less of the book. But you've been giving yourself and for that👏👏👏👏👏 Good luck for the next part"
Difficult to grab the sense of the story
"I suppose this is a translation, but not a very correct one, as it is very difficult to grab what is going on. I also had the impression that whole parts of texts - or explinations - were missing from the story, which would have clarified what the history was all about. As I could make out, the story is about a teenager, with special powers, his parents are influential, as his mother comes to save him from a police station where he's being interrogated for a murder case. AL"
