I love this plot

"You have amazing details. However, you sometimes go into too much detail. There are parts in your story where the MC is explaining her every move. Also, I think you should describe what the characters are feeling instead of just saying it. Like when she first sees Cody with his shirt off, did her cheeks get red? Did she stop breathing for second? Secondly, I want to say that I LOVE the plot and I can’t wait to read more! The punctuation is great with only minor mistakes. Some paragraphs are a little too big so you should try spacing it out. Lastly, in the end of chapter two when they went to the rodeo I wished you went more into what happened at the event to add on to the slow burn. I see in your bio you said you’re a new writer and you don’t know where to start, but you already have such amazing writing skills lol. But my tip to you would be to just read other stories! Trust me it’ll work, I’m also a new writer and I do the same. Anyways good luck on your story! I’m looking forward for chapter 3! 💕🐎🐎🏁 "