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What is your opinion?

The first

"I'm really interested in seeing how this storyline proceeds. I won't give much detail. However, I almost expect some details in this; I just hope I'm delightfully wrong. 😎👍🖤🖤💜🖤"

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Obsessed

"Since I started this book I haven’t been able to put it down. I’ve loved the story line the characters and can’t wait to read more. I would recommend to people I know who also like to read. And the book currently gets max stars because I have nothing bad to say at all about the book. "

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Little faster

"Its really good but hope faster rhythm would be nicer"

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took sooo long to get to the rising action

"it sucks that these chapters arent available, i read so much and prepared for the rising action until I have to subscribe. its hard for the people who dont have. a credit card ti buy these stuff.. "

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Interesting

"The plot is interesting and compelling, in its own way. Chapters 27 & 28 (?) are a duplicate. There have been a few times that it felt like it needed more imagery written in, while other times it felt redundant, i.e., repeated descriptions of Damon's eyes in the early chapters. I was very confused when the story went from the bonfire to her in the evening gown. It felt like it was missing a chapter or paragraph. What happened in between? What was the timeline? Why was she in the gown? Overall, it's a decent story."

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