What is your opinion?
Unexpected turn in the chapter 2
"As I started reading the short story I supposed in the second chapter there would be some kind of continuation with a twisted plot line, however, I found a poem. Which actually isn't so strange, because in the first chapter it was said that the young man sat down to write, and the next chapter showed us what he wrote down. The verse was good, I liked it, although I'm not much of a poetry reading girl. AL"
Very good piece of writing!
"I loved the introduction to the poem. Somehow it made it more real. The poem itself is very beautiful, it reads like a song. I wish it was longer! Very good piece of writing! "
Extreamly confused but I like it
"I had no idea what was going on but its a cool short story :) "
Cold Is The Time
"I believe poetry is this author's forte. Although some technical skills need to be mastered and perhaps a little bit of tweaking in terms of the plot, the imagery is stunning. Poetry is just the place where you can allow vibrant imagery to shine. Keep at it! You have real potential!"
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