What is your opinion?
Brenda’s thoughts
"It is good a lot of twist and turns.I haven’t guessed one thin right yet .Way to go .Very interesting."
Great substance
"I liked seeing the transition in writing from choppy to more fluid which shows growth but definitely edit again the first 15 chapters and keep going. I love a story with a lot of suspense."
Alpha looks for his luna on a farm
"Not a bad story. Some details have been left out. Why did she think Rick was her mate? Why did Rick let her put Sunny in the dungeon? Things like that. "
Alpha looks for his Luna on a farm
"The plot is sound but the rest needs work. Continually repeating the same lines, horrible grammar & the story jumps 20 years and doesn’t have an ending. "
Alpha looks for his luna on a farm
"The wire is very choppy. No one thought is completed before another story line appears. Language and grammar are also a real issue in understanding this story"
