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Feels totally unfinished

"The story has been great but there is no ending… Did Trevor get away with his crimes? Did they stay together? What happens when she has to go home? Or does she stay? And what about the other girls? Sorry hate not having any answers. Its like leaving a book on a massive cliff hanger with only a side spin off for any answers."

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This is a sad but all to frequent storu woman have to endure hands of a man

"I love the blossoming heart affection between the two love birds. Young love is so adorable. This story speaks to the imbalance of our world. How women are expected to endure the cruelty and disrespect from men who only see women as property to be dominated. I would have loved to read a chapter bout the school starting a class on self defence along with what the signs of abuse and what to watch for. It would be even better if those classes started in elementary school so young adults don’t have to face sexual assault in high schools But this story ends with at least some power being given back to the victim Well written "

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