What is your opinion?
Nice
"A beautiful vampire love story with twists, turns and surprises! Enjoyed reading it. "
Epitome of perfection
"It was a wonderful book and I believe these ratings are at most suitable for it"
Interesting
"I love the story so far. Few grammar errors but can be overlooked when enjoying the story. Keep it up"
Killing a beautiful vampire
"Very good story line"
Amazing
"I don't write reviews but I feel that I absolutely love this book. It keeps you guessing and I love the fact that you did the back story so we know why theon is the way he is."
I love this book!
"I can't wait to see what happens next! I love it"
Killing A Beautiful Vampire
"I am obsessed with this book!! It is a great romantic vampiric fantasy book! I highly recommend it to other people who are obsessed with vampire romance! "
Better than expected and am in love
"This book didn’t immediately get my attention at first. Still it made me fell in love as the story develops. Much better when I reread chapters the second time. I love Theon, he is already so hot. Few grammatical errors but it's fine for me. It has tropes but has also freshness. Some lines are so good. "
Love love love!
"The dialogue in this book is strong and intriguing, and I love how the author is building the plot from the very beginning. I feel like I’m watching a tv show! Great work author, I can’t wait to read more!"
TENSE AND GRIPPING!
"Wow! Just wow!!! What a great paranormal story!! I won't lie. This is not my usual reading. When I first read it I did not have any expectations at all, but omg!! By the first paragraph, I am already intrigued! I mean who wouldn't after an opening like that? The female character is just so amazing as well! She has this badass, kickass vibe, who is strong, independent, and just brave. I adore her so much and though the narration is in third POV, I find that I know her well enough to feel any sympathy for her. The author, AKL, just has a great way of describing her personality through her actions and her monologue that she feels like life-like to me even though this is definitely fiction! I also love the way AKL narrates the story! It has a great pace. I know the background story and I love how the actions scene unravels. I also love the way AKL takes time to introduces the characters in the story, it blends so well, no rushed, and in fact, it gives more depth and emotion. I was only planning to read several chapters, but here I am in chapter six and I think I will be here for a long run <3 Waiting for the next update AKL ;) It's a wonderful book!!<3"
Intriguing, suspenseful
"I loved how you portrayed all the characters. Your imagination is so beautiful to create this wonder of a book so far. I really enjoyed it! The suspense made me want to know more, I was so hooked!!! I really loved this story!! Definitely recommend to anyone and everyone!! I can’t wait to see what happens next. <3"
Love the start, have good potential, let's see how it goes
"There isn't much to read yet but it has a good potential to be a hot read. Have decent grammar, and intriguing writing style. Some readers might get bored if they don't like action. I love good action so I don't mind."
Killing a Beautiful Vampire
"I think overall, this story is good. The pacing is extremely quick, making it pretty hard to grasp what is going on, especially since you're introducing so many characters within the first few chapters. It's a little overwhelming. I'm also just having a hard time grasping what's going on? The reader should have at least a good idea within the first two/three chapters as to where they are, who the main characters are, and what the main conflict is - all of this is still pretty ambiguous at this point and it's moving extremely fast from one scene to the next with little warning. We're at her apartment and within one line, we're somewhere else, but not sure where, then within a few more lines, we're at another place - it's a bit of whiplash. I'd recommend staying in scenes longer. Show the reader why they're important. If a scene isn't important to the overall story, then cut it, and if it is - give us time to really get our bearings and learn what's going on. It all moves so fast that I don't really understand the significance of anything. Techcnially, there are a few grammatical/spelling errors throughout, but nothing that takes away from the story too much and couldn't be fixed with a round of editing. Overall, I think the main thing that needs to be addressed is pacing, and this story could go from a four start to a five star, because it is a very creative plot and I do enjoy your characters. Hope this helps!"
