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Great beginning, amazing middle, ok end

"The book is amazing! Great character with constant details, a strong plot and growing dialogue. Through the entire book we get amazing detail and an immersive setting. I am a little disappointed on the ending. It seemed rushed and as if it was a second thought. {Some Spoilers Ahead (skip to bottom to pass spoilers)} The second to last chapter it’s the last big step to reaching the end goal. The main character and the 3 contributing characters begins the last task. Instead of dissolving the characters smoothly, all of them are killed at once, except the main character. I understand getting the main character alone but this was abrupt. At the last chapter you introduce us to a plot twist, a new world, and the main character finally reached the end goal: to elevate. Then with some dialogue and revenge for their friends, they end the world and themselves like that. It seems we reach the climax of the story and it ends within a second with the suicide of the main character. {End of spoiler} Overall this book was filled with amazing dialogue, characters, setting, and plot. Thought the ending could’ve been more thought out and just with more. Im definitely going to ready any other book you have published or plan to in the future. Thanks for the great story!"

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Great read

"Enjoying my time reading this authors work. Descriptions of characters and environments make you feel like you are there watching everything unfold "

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