Good so far

"I must say the writing style is very compelling and eloquent, but something about this story that bugs me are the characters and their interactions—the MC and the love interest seemed to just, to put it bluntly, lust after each other from the first moment. The dialogue is great, but the events themselves seem rushed. I don't know if this was a simple passage written for fun or if it's meant to be a full novel, but in any case I find the writing style very elegant."