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What is your opinion?
You were missing some of your punctuation and grammar but overall is amazing
"Overall is amazing "
I would love it if u didn't cut out some of the parts like the sex scenes and others
"The novel is good buh I would love it if u stopped cutting the sex scenes and some others it should be in full please "
Good Story
"While this was a good second book, there were many times the flow was interrupted by errors or sudden endings to a point that it seemed like a portion was taken out. There were also instances where chapters were copied so maybe it was a formatting error. The overall plot and story was good I just wish we knew what happened to Jess & Simon since there were serious crimes they committed. "
