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Luna Battle: The Game

"Second time reading this story and I enjoyed it just as much as the first. There was a lot going on that somehow managed to fit together well to keep the plot interesting. I do wish we heard a little more about Elara’s life before or the mystery behind her powers and this prophecy but it was a great read all the same. "

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The Luna Battles

"I really enjoyed this book I like the fact that it want to explicit and it wasn’t to drawn out it was a very good plot l. I would recommend this book to Fantasy readers."

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👍🏻

"I enjoyed this story a lot, it was a little hard to keep up with who's perspective I was reading from at points but it didn't take long to figure it out and also didn't take away from the enjoyment I got from reading this story. Will definitely be reading the next book. "

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Brilliant

"A different spin on wolves and magic. Wolves surviving outside of the host and magic to pull them out. Loved it. "

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A happy discovery

"It's crazy how a nobody turned somebody can make one feel they are capable of overcoming any and everything."

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Luna Battle: The Game

"Great Book! It just needs an editor to clear up grammar mistakes and typos, as well as making it clear, every chapter of the book, who is speaking. Definitely it’s awesome book with great character development of the main characters. "

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Luna games

"Love this book so far. I wish it was easier to find and purchase online versions and not have to buy “coins”"

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Couldn’t stop reading

"I would have been able to follow it more completely if the POV was clearer at the beginning of each chapter "

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Good read

"The story is very engaging and a page-turner that I can put the phone down. I have kept me engaged during the plot."

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Our luna contest

"It's not always clear who is talking. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors as well. "

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Luna Battle

"Great novel, can’t put it down, really good storyline "

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The lunas battle

"I love the story line it's not just a straight forward typical he fell for her /she fell for him because they are mates. It's a new twist to the type of story which I love! Some of the words and spelling does need checking though, as some words are written instead of the intended word."

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Good

"Good to read from beginning to the end"

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Great read

"This story is compelling and fun to read. The only thing I would say needs work is the spelling and Grammar. Otherwise it's a great story and I hope the author continues to write 🥰"

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Luna battle

"Bdhxj Andredal"

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Luna Battle: The Game

"I loved this book. i enjoyed the story however i felt some parts lacked description as the emotional side was more complex, having more descriptive words would have helped a lot with the holes a bit more. I loved the personification of change in the story. I hope you write more stories as they are extremely good stories and i couldn't put it down."

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Love

"Love this book. Just wish it was explained better as to how the old king was still alive and how Darius knew. Anyone over 18 can read this"

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VERY GOOD STORY !!

"Although I have to go through the sentences again and again to understand it, I know there are rooms for improvement. This is a good one. I just wished you could elaborate a werewolf's power. They have heightened senses but failed to address their sense of smell, also, the bond between mates has loopholes. I hope it can be better. Thank you so much for this great story!"

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The Luna Battle!

"I loved the plot. It was excellent and well thought out. It is good versus evil. I wish there was more about the Bad King first then just killing him off. That was just too easy. There should’ve been more back and forth between the father and the two young kings. "

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Great story line but needs some proof reading

"Needs some proof reading "

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