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The main character really got her fantasy fulfilled

"The fantasy a lot of us have but shy away from saying . Very well portrayed. The characters, the twists even in a short story, different plot from what one can assume. Well done "

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Acting out my Fantasy

"The main character got a bit more than she bargained for in this short story. Nice one Marsha"

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