What is your opinion?
Sharing my thoughts...
"I want the best ending the protagonist life "
Beneath the Billionaires Veil
"Great story. There we moments of confusion. With the names but I loved how you showed the vulnerability of the characters and how in the end they found their true loves"
What was this really about?
"I have shared your story with eight other people. They all agree with me. Please rewrite please get somebody to edit for you. Please have more than one thought please stop repeating the same thing again and again, and again and again and again, and again, and again. You get the point it’s extremely repetitive. It is very difficult to read. I did read it from beginning to end, in your story, they have been married like seven times they started a philanthropic organization, five or more times the first four chapters are exactly the same thing written again, and again you change the names of people so many times it was just ridiculous. I understand that taking on the endeavor of making a book is really challenging and can be difficult. It is hard to understand where to draw the line in your story, but maybe you should get some advice or read a few books yourself to help you understand how they are composed. I do appreciate the fact that you made an effort that is amazing. But I truly believe that your book would have been much better and the points in it taken much more easily. If you had had someone else help you in writing."
