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the intruder.

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Summary

after a long day marcy decides to order some food and hangout by herself. little did she know that would be the last normal afternoon she will ever have

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

chapter one, the nerves.



it was a calm afternoon, i walk out of my room scrolling through tiktok thinking of what to eat. i come to terms with the fact i can't cook so i just get door dash fried chicken. while i wait i put popcorn in the microwave because it would take a solid 40 minutes for them to get here, i live out in the woods so i kind of grow used to the wait. i put on a scary movie with my popcorn, until i heard a knock at the door... "that's strange, normally it takes longer.. maybe they just got good service.." i think to myself. i go look through the peephole to find that no one is there.. "strange.." i whisper to myself. i open the door to see a small brown box, i then walk inside and open it. thinking that it's my new horror novel. except when i open it there's a note inside. Weird, i look back and forth then to the note. i then open the note and see there's block letters instead of normal handwriting, i read the note slowly, and when i finish reading my mouth drops and my popcorn falls to the floor, in the note, it says... "i see you..."i go run to check the back door to see that it is unlocked, i lock it right away and do the same to the front door. "what the fuck!? this has to be some stupid prank!?" i say to myself, unfortunately my family is on a vacation so i don't really know what to do.. all i know is that at least i can say what i want and do what i want. i go back to my movie, i suddenly get a nerve racking feeling that someone or something is watching me... i'm scared and alone so i decided to call my friends to have a party, hopefully that's a good enough of a distraction.but when i go back to the box i saw something unexpected, there was a tracker in the box... i get scared and dispose of it. soon enough i hear the doorbell ring, "that was the worst 20 minutes of my life" i say under my breath as if there was someone who wouldn't like to hear that.
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