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Neat story, cool action

"I think this is a cool story with lots of cool action. I like how you began the story with the war scene and I think the shift from that to the main story with Meta Knight is done well. I can't wait to see how it ends."

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Pretty cool

"I don't understand all what's happening mainly because of the résumé or introduction, but i find it very entertaining . Also i think it has too many description not enough dialogue but it's normal since it's a fight , you also tell a lot of things but you don't really describe the scene besides when someone gets cut or unalived . That's just me tho"

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