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Fast and Fun

"Ray Simmons' tale of intrigue captures your imagination from the get-go. Written in a fast-paced style and spanning multiple locations around the world, this story has everything you'd want in a thriller - sex, violence, danger, and surprise. Ray even throws in the fascinating and little known dimension of Foreign Exchange Trading, otherwise known as FOREX, and its importance to the futures of both China and the United States. Add Islamist terror, agents from the CIA and Chinese Intelligence and the result is a powerful mix. The only distraction in the story comes from some technical problems with typos, misspellings, and a few grammatical errors too. Readers who can't look past these might find them problematic. Those who can look past these issues will be rewarded by the entertaining plot. Kudos to you, Ray Simmons!"

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The China Formula

""The China Formula" will make a great movie. Although, after part two of the story is added, it may become a longer than average action movie -an epic.."

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