What is your opinion?
GREAT ACTION STORY!
"I love how fast-paced this story is! From the first page you will witness a killing grand scheme and an effort of a soldier to save a baby prince who was just born. From that moment to getting the baby to safety is filled with actions and suspense and various fighting scenes. I cant help but drawn to Sylia! This brave souldier has tried so hard to protect the baby, their future king, and I hope he will be alright till the end of the story :) My suggestion would only be to give more details in the war/fighting men, as it will make the reader feels more absorbed into the story witnessing fighting matches. But if its too bloody and you dont want to make this story to be too scary, its okay! It is great either way, you have already done a wonderful job!^^ I am in chapter 6 while reading this. I plan to pick up the book and continue reading it again, hopefully by the time this story finishes! Looking forward how this story will go and how the prince will rule and get revenge for the mess the bad people do to his kingdom! Good one author!^^"
Very Suspenseful!
"The author does a great job pulling the reader into the story! The drama and suspense is very well done. There are only a few spelling and grammar mistakes but they don't really take away from the story. I am very excited to see how the prince comes into play in this story. Great job author!"
