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What is your opinion?
Suspenseful
"From what I have read so far. (7 chapters) This was full of suspense and drama, very interesting it made me want to keep reading. The dialogue was very strong and your writing style was very unique and detailed, I will definitely read more!"
Good start with decent promise
"This is a decent attempt at dective thriller. However it should have a bit more reseach into the details to give the story a bit of flesh with that said i think as is it is a fine start. "
